by Max Barry

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Region: Kantrias

Zoygaria wrote:
RP: The Paradis War

Okada, Southern Aquiląnia, Zoygaria

The hail of lead seemed never-ending. The cornered Zoygarians were pinned down on all sides: they took shelter in rubble, sewage pipes, and the remains of buildings— anything to protect themselves from the cold death raining upon them. Sergeant Aito and a squad of his men had taken up positions in and around the drainage ditches of the city to provide some shelter from the cruisers raining hellfire on their positions. The ditches would provide some camouflage and, hopefully, choke points with which to counter an Ulmian advance. However, if the water continued rising, soon they wouldn't need camouflage: they would be dead anyways.

Slowly but surely, the Ulmian barrage trickled to a snail's pace. They were still firing on the city, but with most of the buildings turned to dust, they could be more precise with their targets, conservative with their shells. Aito took the opportunity to have himself and a few others scout the terrain, and see if they could salvage a few of the guns they had set up. A thick layer of dust had overtaken the ruined streets, and combined with the pelting rain, made visibility a nightmare. The troops cautiously moved about, hoping no stray artillery shells found them before they found their emplacements. Miraculously, two of the five tripods they had set up were still intact. The rest lay in pieces, or were simply gone. The group brought them back to their makeshift trench, and prepared for combat. Sergeant Aito radioed any troops able to listen.

"Soldiers of Zoygaria: this is Sergeant Aito. The enemy is coming. Use the low visibility and rubble to your advantage— The enemy can't hit what they can't see. Use what vantage points you can, and always stay near cover. God be with you."

As he put down the radio, over the heavy rainfall, he heard the sound of boots on concrete: the Ulmians had arrived.

OOC: Ulm, I'm fully ready to end the Battle of Okada here with this next post. Obviously a defeat for Zoygaria, though if I may request some things? The remaining Zoygarians will doubtlessly be annihilated, and there are some still alive, but injured in the rubble. As far as how many Ulmians they (the defenders) take with them, I'll leave that up to you. The hurricane shelters are intact and still filled with people, and are guarded by two squads of soldiers. They will likely surrender for the sake of the people, or be too busy trying to clear the rubble of the capitol building to notice. Governor Javek is alive, albeit injured from the building's collapse.

Perhaps we should make battles shorter and more decisive in the future? Otherwise the war might take forever XD
I advise we flesh out the writing with our "main characters" and focal points (ex: Nova/Reaper Squadron), and make the less-major battles shorter, if that makes sense.

It all makes sense but is this what we really want? We already spent many months fighting this way and ending it like that seems anticlimatic to me. Battle of Aquilonnia was supposed to be prelude to the true war. I have nothing against turning it into battle reports but I think that it is the individuality that makes those RP posts interesting. Additionally keeping everything detailed and adding perception of character prevents confusion. When the amount of detail is reduced misunderstandings inevitably follow. I am not sure about everyone else but Zoygarian RP posts without that would feel alien to me.

Leutria wrote:Just noting that the master dispatch for this event is now pinned to the region's page. Make sure you read what your fellow Kantrians have come up with :)

I really should have checked previous examples. Big oof.

Zoygaria, Too-technical japan, and Grand duchy of Gracia

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