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Ammmericaaaa wrote:

What’s the plot?

I mean, do you really want to read a 30-paragraph post in multiple spoilers?

Aina Kuokoa wrote:

I mean, do you really want to read a 30-paragraph post in multiple spoilers?

lol.
I’d suggest using the 7 plot point structure

The Hook
The Plot Turn 1
The Pinch Point 1
The Midpoint
The Pinch Point 2
The Plot Turn 2
The Resolution

Here’s the full article. I use this for my short story

https://andreafeccomandi.medium.com/the-7-point-story-structure-45f1a1ea550f#:~:text=The%207%2DPoint%20Structure%20is%20a%20structure%20that%20divides%20the,with%20more%20action%20and%20tension.

Ammmericaaaa wrote:

Sleeps important. Don’t you know the story of bob who pressed the wrong red button while the president sleep deprived him and he accidentally nuked the presidents affair house

No like we didn’t need sleep we won’t get any health problems without sleeeping

where are my cards!?

Cards are gone for now.

Aina Kuokoa wrote:

Question to whoever is still on the RMB:

I'm writing a fantasy book for school, but it's not going very well. I can't seem to connect the different plot points like how I initially envisioned them, and I'm also having issues with pacing the story.

Any possible solutions you all have?

add kegs. i love kegs

🚨📢NEW FACTBOOK ALERT!📢🚨
i just dropped a brand new factbook.

National Overview

by The Federation of Virifortis

The Federation of Virifortis

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Flag

Coat of Arms

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Motto: Ordem, Progresso e União

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Anthem: A Marcha da Coragem

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Geological Location

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Population	4 billion
Capital	Planápolis
Largest City	Rio Claro
Official Language and National Language	Portuguese
Demonym	Virifortisian
Ethnic Groups	Mixed (45%) White (42%) Black (10%) East Asian (2%) Indigenous (1%)
Religion	Irreligious (45.35%) Catholicism (31%) Protestantism (15,7%) Other (7,95%)
Government	Federal Presidential Republic
President of the Federation	Marcos Cardoso
Legislature	National Congress
Upper House	Senate
Lower House	Chamber of Deputies
Currency	Aurum (AU) (VIA)
GDP	US$93 Trillion
GDP per capita	US$26,000
Exchange Rate	AU1 = US$1.52
HDI	0,893 (Very High )
Time Zone	UTC–2 to −5
Calling Code	+11
Drives on the	Right
ISO Code	VI
Internet LTD	.vi

Read factbook

Thoughts? Maybe I'll add history and those details someday :p

Virifortis wrote:

National Overview

by The Federation of Virifortis

The Federation of Virifortis

---

Flag

Coat of Arms

---

Motto: Ordem, Progresso e União

---

Anthem: A Marcha da Coragem

---

Geological Location

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Population	4 billion
Capital	Planápolis
Largest City	Rio Claro
Official Language and National Language	Portuguese
Demonym	Virifortisian
Ethnic Groups	Mixed (45%) White (42%) Black (10%) East Asian (2%) Indigenous (1%)
Religion	Irreligious (45.35%) Catholicism (31%) Protestantism (15,7%) Other (7,95%)
Government	Federal Presidential Republic
President of the Federation	Marcos Cardoso
Legislature	National Congress
Upper House	Senate
Lower House	Chamber of Deputies
Currency	Aurum (AU) (VIA)
GDP	US$93 Trillion
GDP per capita	US$26,000
Exchange Rate	AU1 = US$1.52
HDI	0,893 (Very High )
Time Zone	UTC–2 to −5
Calling Code	+11
Drives on the	Right
ISO Code	VI
Internet LTD	.vi

Read factbook

Thoughts? Maybe I'll add history and those details someday :p

damn mobile users >:( /j

heeeeyyyyy im back yallllll!

Ammmericaaaa wrote:

lol.
I’d suggest using the 7 plot point structure

The Hook
The Plot Turn 1
The Pinch Point 1
The Midpoint
The Pinch Point 2
The Plot Turn 2
The Resolution

Here’s the full article. I use this for my short story

https://andreafeccomandi.medium.com/the-7-point-story-structure-45f1a1ea550f#:~:text=The%207%2DPoint%20Structure%20is%20a%20structure%20that%20divides%20the,with%20more%20action%20and%20tension.

There's also The Hero's Journey

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You’re welcome
Also I hope you forgive me for sending my troops to kill your zombies last Z-Day

NEVER AGAIN.